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  Commune

  Book One

  By Joshua Gayou

  © 2017 Joshua Gayou.

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  Acknowledgements

  To my wife, Jennifer, who did so much to improve my writing and helped to make Amanda more real,

  To my good friend, Scott Brandt, who saved me from making several stupid civilian mistakes,

  To my friend, Brittany-Rose Tribulski, who helped me to understand that each person in the world must have their own Voice,

  And to the rest of my friends, who assured me that this was a story worth sharing,

  Thank you all.

  Contents

  1 – The Flare

  2 – Cedar City

  3 – Primm

  4 – Self Reliance

  5 – Trafficking

  6 – Companions

  7 – Car Shopping

  8 – Carjacked

  9 – Reunited

  10 – Road Trip

  11 – Swap Meet

  12 – Parting

  13 – Arrival

  14 – Good Times

  15 – Bad Times

  Epilogue

  A Note on the Narrative

  1 – The Flare

  Jake

  “It’s amazing how everything breaks when you don’t have an army of people staring at it.”

  This is where Jacob Martin (who we all know as Jake) decides to start his story: at the fall of everything. I would love to have him start further back than this. We would all love to hear it, truly. We have all lived with him now for various periods of time, spanning from several months to at least two years. The realities of day to day life have made him familiar to us but the fact remains: we know essentially nothing about this man’s origin. I suspect some of the others in our community may have a pool running – the person who comes closest to guessing the details of Jake’s former life takes the pot! This is all contingent, of course, on me wheedling the details from him. Hope springs eternal.

  Those of us who have asked him directly about his life well understand the fruitless nature of this pursuit. No one ever asks a second time or, at least, not often. He’s not mean about it (I don’t think I can even remember him ever raising his voice). He simply favors you with a flat, emotionless stare. I’ve gotten it once and I can tell you: you don’t want a second helping after the first taste. It is not a look that telegraphs danger; rather, it is a betrayal of Jake’s inner workings. There is clearly something happening inside him during these times. He is also clearly expending a great force of will to hide this. It is unnerving to see a face you associate with familiar warmth assume an aspect of reptilian disregard. Having been a part of the commune for over a year, living close with the people in it, struggling for survival alongside them, and looking along with them to Jake for leadership, the thought that Jake might be more Stranger than Friend is terrible.

  My name is Brian Chambers. My job, within the context of this document, is to write down everything that Jake and the other members of the commune care to share. I was “awarded” this position, despite my best efforts to protest against it, primarily because I am familiar with shorthand (a skill left over from my college days). This skill combined with the fact that Jake is unable to write (or at least he cannot write in a way that makes sense to others) means that this appointment was a foregone conclusion.

  We must assume that Jake can read, after a fashion; he has taught himself many things from the books in Billy’s library. This fact notwithstanding, I have witnessed him attempt to read through some bit of text while others stand by awaiting him. There is a certain charm to these events; he always tries to read the item handed to him. We all know he will stare at the page for a few seconds, shake his head with an exasperated grunt, and then hand it to one of the onlookers and ask them to explain. This is one of his behaviors that have endeared him to many here. He never betrays frustrated anger during these interactions nor does he express embarrassment. To my knowledge, he has never attempted to hide his condition from anyone. My best personal guess is that he has some form of dyslexia. He can bull through reading things, mostly through patient willpower alone, but he is not willing to make us wait for him (his advice is usually being solicited on these occasions, anyway). I am almost certain that writing coherently is beyond his ability. Despite all of this, he never utters an angry word. He only offers a sheepish, apologetic grin and asks to be helped. It is odd what things might strike a person as brave, yet this has always seemed to me like one of the bravest things he does.

  In summation, I am gifted at taking rapid dictation and Jake writes nothing at all. Some of our other members who have fallen naturally into the position of “Elder” have determined that we should begin to keep records for those generations that come after us (I would add that concerns for such concepts as “legacy” and “posterity” naturally become the province of the aged, however tact restricts me from saying this out loud). It is certainly possible that this record is found useful by some unknown reader at a later time – I honestly think it just as likely that this is our way of leaving something behind. This is the evidence of our existence. The Census, public records, and the sum total of all digital human knowledge are lost to us. We must be our own historians.

  Jake is the first of us; the first surviving member of the Jackson Commune. Additionally, everyone else who lives here follows his lead. It is natural and right that the record starts with him.

  At the time of this writing we believe Jacob Martin to be in his mid to late thirties. We have made our guess based on small details the most astute of us have managed to glean in conversation with him. The current estimate of his age is attributed to the earliest movie he has admitted to seeing in the theater: E.T. His memory of this event is spare, limited only to sitting in his father’s lap. Consequently, we estimate his age by adding five years to the film’s release date. Attempts at uncovering more information from this memory resulted in an emotional shutdown, effectively ending the conversation until a later time. With practice, one discovers what subjects to avoid.

  Jake’s appearance is an odd combination of remarkable and unremarkable factors. Physically, he is incredibly strong. Another of our members, Blake Gibson, has reported personally seeing Jake lift a barbell loaded with over five hundred pounds from the concrete floor of the garage (a set of barbells, plates, and a rack are among the many items with which Billy had outfitted his property years ago). Despite his overall strength, Jake resembles a strongman competitor more than a bodybuilder. His shoulders, legs, trunk, and back are tremendously thick; however he lacks the giant pectorals and biceps of one who focuses on physique. He has far more physicality in common with the great apes of Africa than he does with any Olympian.

  He has a mashed-in nose from a previous fracture with a jaw and neck that makes his head look slightly undersized which, Amanda assures me, was far less noticeable when he was not shaving his head. The hair that is visible (in his beard and in the stubble of his scalp) is brown with patches of grey. I have asked him why he goes to the effort to shave his scalp, which must be a burdensome undertaking in a world free of abundant electricity. His reply was that he was once nearly killed by a man who was able to grab a handful of his hair. Oddly enough, his beard appears to be thick enough to present the same weakness; I assume someone will have to make the mistake of attempting such a gambit before Jake maintains a clean shave all over.

 
The evidence of his age is hidden from his face until he smiles, a rare enough event under any circumstances. At rest, his face is smooth with the exception of the forehead, which is always lined with worry or concentration. When he smiles, his cheeks and eyes explode in wrinkles like a fireworks show. The rest of us sometimes think we have underestimated his age when he smiles.

  I ask Jake to start at the beginning of The Flare, knowing that any attempts to push back further will run the risk of ending the narrative before it has the chance to begin. He leans back in his chair and settles against the table with his blocky chin cupped in his hand, thinking.

  Finally, he says, “You know, it’s amazing how everything breaks when you don’t have an army of people staring at it.”

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  I’m not speaking of when The Flare hit, of course. I mean after that. The Flare was what it was; what we all remember. One day you step outside (if you were lucky enough to be outside when it occurred) and saw what I can only describe as The Northern Lights on steroids. The dead of night and there’s enough light to read by with some of the wildest colors dancing across the sky that you’ve ever seen, making everything all around you take on this other-worldly, ghostly appearance. This goes on for days and you get used to it, of course. There was nothing on the news but coverage of the event; I saw more of Neil DeGrasse Tyson’s face on the TV in those few days than years’ worth of wasting time on the Internet.

  Those few days of remaining 24-hour cycle coverage became pretty interesting, if not outright fun. Suddenly everyone was an amateur cosmologist weighing in on what they thought was coming next. The conspiracy theorists came falling out of the woodwork, like they always do, and blamed it all on everything from space-based weapons systems to aliens. The “journalists” on TV ate all this garbage up (because what the hell else are you going to do with a 24 hour news cycle?) and hit their expert guests with unceasing, breathless questions. “What comes next?” “What of the rumors we’re seeing on Reddit?” “What should our viewers at home be doing?”

  At first, all the experts were very soothing. They almost fulfilled the role of Hyperbole Goalies, catching each idiotic or leading comment from the news anchors and pulling them (and everyone else) back down to reality. In the first day, all we heard were the few lines of calming mantra: Solar Flares and Coronal Mass Ejections (CMEs) are two different things and don’t always occur at the same time; it’s incredibly unlikely that a CME would be directed right at Earth given the distances involved; the Earth has this really neat thing called a Magnetosphere in place to protect us from this kind of activity; and so on.

  A couple of days into the dazzling sky lights, we started to notice the narrative change. The experts became less placating. We heard less and less about the likelihood (or lack thereof) of an impact to day to day life as a result of the solar event. We heard more and more side stories about disaster preparedness kits, how much water you should have stashed on hand, knowing the location of local community crisis management centers. Various local news stations started to broadcast the possibility of rolling brown-outs as a mitigation tactic just in case something really gnarly was coming our way. I actually don’t know if anything ever came of that; it seemed the officials had only just begun to discuss mitigation when all the lights went out.

  This was no normal outage either; I recall sparks jumping out of some of my wall sockets and a few of the homes up the street burned down completely. We had already been living with the idea that something like this could happen for at least a few days by this point, so many of us started to filter outside from our houses (usually you’d just stay inside, light a candle, and wait for your WIFI to come back). It was evening and I was standing around outside discussing the possibility of a block-wide BBQ with a neighbor when we all started hearing the crashing of the cars up and down the highway. Later on some of us figured out that it probably wasn’t every car that started crashing; just the newer, fancier ones that had fully electronic braking systems. Turns out those few were enough to create a massive pile-up for miles on the overcrowded California freeways.

  It was a little after that when planes started falling out of the sky; again, not all of them – just the really unlucky ones with electrically controlled hydraulic systems. Sometime later (once the news slowly started coming back online and being distributed through old-fashioned means – in many cases military personnel in old-school jeeps), we learned that The Flare, as it was being called, was the single greatest solar flare/CME ever encountered in history with a magnitude several times greater than the event recorded in the mid 1800’s (I don’t recall what that one’s name was anymore or when it was, exactly).

  All in all, it was a massive, crippling blow to an overburdened power grid running at capacity. This wasn’t just localized to North America either; apparently the only countries that hadn’t been greatly affected were those of the 3rd world with little to no infrastructure to speak of. Slowly over the next few days, chaos bled quickly into mass insanity. At first, when everything went down, it was a nice change of pace. Many of us commented on how nice it was to unplug from the stupid TV for a few hours. By the second day it was less like a nice little diversion and more like an unplanned camping trip; still not so bad. After a week, water and sewage began to be a serious problem. The Flare had effectively killed all of the satellites (which we were informed were now also on a slow, plodding collision course with the planet) so all but the slowest, courier-based communication was off line. Supplies and relief were non-existent. You may or may not be old enough to remember Hurricane Katrina but, if you are, picture that times 10, only spread out across 20% or 30% of the planet. We were informed that we were collectively looking at about a six month recovery period just before the riots broke out and Martial Law was declared. This was also the same time that all news just stopped coming. It isn’t that they weren’t trying to get us information; the military in our area and the military couriers remained friendly with those of us who weren’t behaving like fools. There just wasn’t any new information to speak of.

  Life became very different over the next couple of months. We adapted to it (you’d be amazed what you can adapt to when you have no choice). One of the things we had going for us was that the Flare really only affected large electrical systems spread out over a great distance; basically the generation plants, the distribution systems, and the structures connected to them. Instances where smaller, self-contained systems were destroyed (such as airplanes, autos, boats, and personal electronics) were the rare exception and not the rule. Smaller scale electronics that were either not connected to the grid or behind circuit breakers were still functional, which meant that a lot of our gadgetry could still be used provided a backup generator was available. In the meantime, work crews scrambled to replace the blown components of the underlying grid. Over time it seemed as though we were making some traction towards clawing our way back to dominance over the planet. All of the riots had been put down. Those of us who were still lucky enough to have homes worked with the military to set them up as supply distribution points or other critical facilities (it was very much in our interest to do this as it resulted in a Strategic Importance designation, which basically meant your house got its own detachment of armed guards – not a bad deal). I remember tent cities set up all along the streets, fenced off between checkpoints and so forth. It seemed a little off-putting at first but you got the idea real quick that it was just what it had to be. Once things had calmed down, we heard some rumors here and there via the border of how things were going on down in Mexico and the rest of South America. Just those rumors were enough to make us grateful for what we had at home, tent cities and all.

  It seems the world has a way of delivering the second part of a two-punch combo at the time when you can afford it the least. For us, that second punch was The Plague.

  It’s been some years since that time and I still don’t know if anyone figured out where The Plague came from. We’re not even sure what specie of vir
us it was. There was some word that it came out of Arkansas but the lines of communication were so confused by that point that it might as well have come from Mars for all the good that info would do. We learned plenty about it over time through experience and exposure. It started out acting like a common cold, only it held on a lot longer. You could operate anywhere from three weeks to a month with nothing more than an annoying cough or sniffle. At some point, depending on how strong you were I guess, the virus would turn the heat up on you and you spent the next three days or so going from cold to flu to super flu. After that, you eventually suffocated and died.

  The most discouraging aspect of that time (for me) is I’m almost certain that if it had just taken us a little longer to start recovering from the Flare, the virus (a lot of us were calling it the Plague by then) might have stayed local to wherever it came from and burned out like Ebola would tend to do. Instead, the military was making some real progress into getting air travel back on line. When you consider that the virus would just sit and gestate inside you for weeks until it finally ramped up to kill you (combined with its high communicability rate), it’s easy to understand how a localized epidemic quickly blossomed into a pandemic the likes of which we had never seen.

  We know it was airborne. We at least managed to figure that out before it killed most of us.

  We also learned that even the Plague doesn’t have a 100% communicability rate or a 100% mortality rate (even though both numbers were so close to 100% that it didn’t matter on the macro scale). We figured out that immunity could be hereditary; if a mother was immune it always meant that any of her offspring were immune. If the father was immune, offspring had maybe a 50/50 chance of being immune. I’m not sure if there have been any instances of offspring being immune while both of their parents contracted the Plague; there have been so few cases of intact families beyond two or three people that we just can’t say for sure. Anything is possible, I guess. I think I heard that a handful of people actually survived contracting the Plague but their respiratory systems never recovered; think emphysema symptoms for the rest of your life.